ohhh oh oh ohhhoh
If I had a do....llar.
For every time I cleaned up a puddle of piss.
You and I could take a week-long cruise.
ohhh oh oh oh
On a Sea of Bliss.
That's the first verse... I'll keep working on the rest of the song (and keep cleaning up puddles).
5 comments:
ok, so now i'm REALLY hoping you just got a puppy..........
The 2nd verse should have something about puke in it if your house is like mine...you could rhyme it with, er...nuke? but then the song would probably be a little dark even for country
uhm...maybe you shouldn't use " a puddle of piss"
how about "a puddle of piddle"? :0)
Yeah, but there is no body of water that rhymes with "piddle".
I must suggest going from country to blue grass. This song has the makings of one of those sad, lonesome songs that make all mothers tear up. Just a thought!
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