Friday, June 25, 2010

sailin' on the edge of crazy

I just started writing this country song... you think it'll make it to the charts?

ohhh oh oh ohhhoh
If I had a do....llar.
For every time I cleaned up a puddle of piss.
You and I could take a week-long cruise.
ohhh oh oh oh
On a Sea of Bliss.
That's the first verse... I'll keep working on the rest of the song (and keep cleaning up puddles).

5 comments:

Perryn said...

ok, so now i'm REALLY hoping you just got a puppy..........

MaryPat said...

The 2nd verse should have something about puke in it if your house is like mine...you could rhyme it with, er...nuke? but then the song would probably be a little dark even for country

Bia said...

uhm...maybe you shouldn't use " a puddle of piss"

how about "a puddle of piddle"? :0)

:o) mg said...

Yeah, but there is no body of water that rhymes with "piddle".

Anita said...

I must suggest going from country to blue grass. This song has the makings of one of those sad, lonesome songs that make all mothers tear up. Just a thought!