Friday, June 25, 2010

sailin' on the edge of crazy

I just started writing this country song... you think it'll make it to the charts?

ohhh oh oh ohhhoh
If I had a do....llar.
For every time I cleaned up a puddle of piss.
You and I could take a week-long cruise.
ohhh oh oh oh
On a Sea of Bliss.
That's the first verse... I'll keep working on the rest of the song (and keep cleaning up puddles).
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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 25, 2010 at 9:36 PM

    ok, so now i'm REALLY hoping you just got a puppy..........

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  2. MaryPatJune 26, 2010 at 10:07 PM

    The 2nd verse should have something about puke in it if your house is like mine...you could rhyme it with, er...nuke? but then the song would probably be a little dark even for country

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  3. Maria (also Bia)June 27, 2010 at 12:58 PM

    uhm...maybe you shouldn't use " a puddle of piss"

    how about "a puddle of piddle"? :0)

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  4. :o) mgJune 27, 2010 at 2:06 PM

    Yeah, but there is no body of water that rhymes with "piddle".

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  5. AnitaJune 28, 2010 at 11:30 AM

    I must suggest going from country to blue grass. This song has the makings of one of those sad, lonesome songs that make all mothers tear up. Just a thought!

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